This in-class assignment was given to my partner Jake and me. We were supposed to create a story only using one syllable words. This story was fun and expanded more and more as we wrote. I enjoyed how this assignment because it challenged us as writers to expand ourselves out of our comfort zone.
The blue whale dove deep down in to the dark sea. It had just came up for a breath when it saw a boat. This had a big and sharp spear gun. A man stood and scanned the sea for prey, in whale form. The whale turned back up, swam real fast, and aimed for the man with the spear gun. The whale jumped in to the air, and let out a loud moan. It came down with a thud, and smashed the man and his gun with great force. The boat cracked in two, 'cause of the blue whale's weight. A bright sun hue stream pushed the wreck in the sea. "Jack, don't pee in the bath tub, I told you to stop that last time!" yelled Ma. "It won't stop Ma, I just like to play with my toys. I don't mind my pee," said Jack. Jack got sent to his room 'cause of his bad traits. Jack will not pee in the bath tub for a third time.
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